Query and First Page Feedback

Have you been sending out your query letter and receiving nothing but rejections? Maybe something is not-quite-right with your query letter and/or first pages. Maybe there’s a way to revise them so you can get more agent attention. 

Let me help you improve your query and get more attention from agents and indie publishers! 

“Eva really delivered the punch and pizazz my recent query needed. Within a week of the overhaul, I received two full requests—one from an agent and another from a publisher.”

-Tim T. 

“Finding an agent is like going on one of those Bachelor dates. One ill-timed joke and off the show you go. Eva’s insight and sharp suggestions made my messy, unfocused query much more professional and engaging and ready for the first date. Highly recommended.”

– Frank B.

My Query Review Package includes the following:

• I will read your query letter and the first 1,000 words of your manuscript.
• I will provide you with written feedback on your query and first page.
• We will schedule a Zoom call or phone call to discuss how to improve your query submission.

Pay below, or contact me at info@evalangston.com for more information.

(P.S. When you click “add to cart” you will have to then scroll down to see your cart and pay through PayPal. If you’d like to pay through Venmo or check, please reach out and let me know.)

Query & First Page Feedback: $70